I thought everything looked great. It really tells a linear story. I only really understand, though, because of the pitch. We should of seen some type of statistic about electronic control of peoples lives. But very nice and clear footage
I wish there was a slightly more heartwarming ending. good shots and editing, i can't imagine how tough it was to get the right shots with the boy. Loved the initial shots of him getting out of bed. good job!
the story was easy to fallow it was well edited there was good camera usage as in angles. i would have liked it though if you replayed the scream when you cut to the mother so we can be sure she heard it and a few other small things but all together it was well done
The message is clear from almost the moment you see the mom, though the resolution did seem quite rushed, and I have to say I think the driving scene just seemed like filler. Though all in all the shots are clear, the editing is quick and flows well and the message is pretty easy to follow.
I thought that the kid did a pretty good job acting. Hats off to the director on that one. It got the point across of what you pitched, but there were a few things that could have drove it home a little more. There at the end it seemed rushed I wanted to see more remorse from the mother. The music was a good choice to set the tone.
There was a lot of good camerawork and the performances from the actors was pretty solid. The music fit the mood of the story really well. I thought the ending was kind of confusing, but otherwise the story was well-executed.
I like this story. I think this is what people are doing these days. Parents spend all their time on the internet and the kids are being raised by video games, TV, and the internet. Its really sad. This played out really well and the message was conveyed in a way that got the point across.
I like the music, it really sets the tone of the video.I like the different camera angles used, especially how you guys got down to the kid's level. One downside is how after the kid falls it feels like something is missing, then all of a sudden the pizza is here.
Nice music! Could have used a few less fade outs.
ReplyDeletegreat story! the sound was great!
ReplyDeleteI liked the beginning because all the ambient light shining was put to good use. Also, the kid is just too adorable :)
ReplyDeleteI thought everything looked great. It really tells a linear story. I only really understand, though, because of the pitch. We should of seen some type of statistic about electronic control of peoples lives. But very nice and clear footage
ReplyDeleteI wish there was a slightly more heartwarming ending. good shots and editing, i can't imagine how tough it was to get the right shots with the boy. Loved the initial shots of him getting out of bed. good job!
ReplyDeletethe story was easy to fallow it was well edited there was good camera usage as in angles. i would have liked it though if you replayed the scream when you cut to the mother so we can be sure she heard it and a few other small things but all together it was well done
ReplyDeleteThe message is clear from almost the moment you see the mom, though the resolution did seem quite rushed, and I have to say I think the driving scene just seemed like filler. Though all in all the shots are clear, the editing is quick and flows well and the message is pretty easy to follow.
ReplyDeleteI thought that the kid did a pretty good job acting. Hats off to the director on that one. It got the point across of what you pitched, but there were a few things that could have drove it home a little more. There at the end it seemed rushed I wanted to see more remorse from the mother. The music was a good choice to set the tone.
ReplyDeleteThere was a lot of good camerawork and the performances from the actors was pretty solid. The music fit the mood of the story really well. I thought the ending was kind of confusing, but otherwise the story was well-executed.
ReplyDeleteI like this story. I think this is what people are doing these days. Parents spend all their time on the internet and the kids are being raised by video games, TV, and the internet. Its really sad. This played out really well and the message was conveyed in a way that got the point across.
ReplyDeleteI like the music, it really sets the tone of the video.I like the different camera angles used, especially how you guys got down to the kid's level. One downside is how after the kid falls it feels like something is missing, then all of a sudden the pizza is here.
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